I am trying to be kind. Seriously, but I had to pause it 1:11 into your song.
I play guitar. I can play guitar all over the place rock wise, but I am at best a background vocalist and would never consider putting my singing talent at the forefront. Never. I think I sound ok signing along with the radio or what ever, but my voice on tape singing is at best very rough and at worst down right brutal.
You just might want to reconsider ...
Sounds like you put some work into this. Granted, it is rather simple, but that is all right.
Thanks Brent---I'll think about that. Don't worry, I'm not fooling myself. I realize that the vocals are rather stylized and I'm fully aware that this isn't radio material, but I believe the song has merit none the less and I quite like it. And BTW, the last one minute and 55 seconds are by far the best! Anyways, at very least I can take another stab at recording the vocals....so thank-you for your suggestion.